Senior CC please, if you have time.

[Tony]

Still trying to refine my style and techniques. Please comment. I am hopefully getting better at posing. I do take a harder edge with my "style". I don't like things too foo foo. I will post a few on two different posts.

[cerebri]

i like them not much to comment abuot but number 1 has a bit many lines to her left otherwise its good

[ImE]

#1 - I find her leg/knee in the forground a bit distracting as it over powers the acutal subject because it's closer to the lens.

#3 - she needs to lay her right hand down so you don't shoot directly into the back of it.

#4 - I'm not thrilled with the way that shadow cuts thru the lower part of ther face.

[Woden Photo]

Good shots, other than the comments above good images. Watch your compression when uploading them to the web these have really bad artifacting from it.

[AmandaK.Photography]

I like these too Tony. On #5 I wish she was tilting her head and maybe resting it on the doorframe instead of tilting away, but that's my own preference. Good job!

[bsharts]

Nice job Tony. On #1 and #3 I'd prefer to see a softer focus on the background...but that's just my taste. I like what you did with the wall on #2...you made a bland background much more interesting. I don't care for the lighting on #4.

[butterflykiss]

The light on #4 is not flattering. Also the head tilt on the last one is exposing too much of her nexk, list it was mentioned earlier, you could have me tilt the other way and rest her head on the door frame.